Essay+sibi

Suffering: that's how one could describe Jonas's and Gabriels situation. They have run away from their community, my task is to offer them somethings their community never could. My community is called Frieden in German it means peace and we live u to our name. my community has abolished capital punishment or release unlike Jonas's community. We also allow residents of our community to experience a variety of seasons and weathers we also allow residents to hear music and see colour these are things that Jonas's community obliterated from their residents lives. Jonas hated his community from the moment he realised that his community executed innocent civilians both to keep the population under control and to punish rule breakers. My community has abolished capital punishment or release. instead we exil citizens if they commit a serious crime. This is better then capital punishment because this gives the criminal a second chance of life. this is why I believe thatJonas should come to my community because we both share the same ideology about capital punishment. I can say this confidently because Jonas was against his own father after he executed a newborn. I can thus say that Jonas would be happy in my community a community that did not indulge in murder.

His community also concealed different seasons from it's residents finally making them believe that there was no such thing as snow, rain or sun. My community on the other hand, allows residents to experience different seasos and weather but we shield them from harsh weather like drought. This would make Jonas happy because he wanted to experience these things. When Jonas had recieved a memory of snow he was happy but he was angry that his community had rid of snow. On the other hand he wanted to be protected from harsh weather that could cause injuries like sunburns. This means that he could enjoy and at the same time be protected. This is something that his never could do for him.

Jonas wanted all the above but the thing he wanted most most was to see in colour and hear music and share this experience with others. in my community we allow residents to see in colour and to listen to music as long as it does not carry a negative message such as violance. Jonas would like being able to share his knowledge of colours and music with others because from the moment he could see colour he was trying to share this experience with his friend Asher. But Asher could not understand colour so Jonas feelt alone and depressed that other people did not have the same knowledge as him. If he comes to my community he will never again feel lonely.

I think Jonas and Gabriel would be happy in my community because we have abolished capital punishment, we allow people to experience seasons, weathers and we also allow people to see in colour and hear music. I personaly think Jonas and Gabriel will be happy in my community.